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[markpeterjameslegg]

Click on image to see full size resolution... I'm sure I'm gonna get hounded for the Pen and Post It idea, but I love it

[killermonkey]

Wow that's quite an improvement. I would write the author on the post it note with a slightly less annoying script font. The is no need to include GoldenEye Source anywhere since you are already in the game.

[markpeterjameslegg]

Good one... I never thought of that

[kraid]

There's no need for a Goldeneye Source writing at all, trust the user that he knows which game he actually started.
Also move the Author either above or directly beyond the image, otherwise it could be misstaken as the author of the hint.

[markpeterjameslegg]

How's this...

[markpeterjameslegg]

Here's a couple more...

[killermonkey]

A+ !

[markpeterjameslegg]

WOW... An A+ from KM, that's really something. However, I can't take all the credit, the feedback got me here, thanks people 

[Jonathon [SSL]]

Like others have said, huge improvement. Only thing I would change is making the shadow from the PPK much more diffuse, and perhaps playing with the lightness/contrast on the PPK image to make the light reflections on the image itself less contrast-y.

Other than that, loving the look of the pen+stickynote and basically everything else!

[markpeterjameslegg]

Like others have said, huge improvement. Only thing I would change is making the shadow from the PPK much more diffuse, and perhaps playing with the lightness/contrast on the PPK image to make the light reflections on the image itself less contrast-y.

Other than that, loving the look of the pen+stickynote and basically everything else!

When you say Diffused Jonathan, do you mean more blurred? Sorry... I really am a noob

EDIT: Figured out how to get the shadows more blurred... Compare with above image.

[Graslu]

I think you should change the position of the PPK on each loading screen (like in the default ones), looks repetitive.
Also, in my opinion, it looks like plastic lol (the gun), so I would use GE:S one or find another. Would be good if you could use GE:S' font, too, it'll look really different when you read hints or just by comparing it to official ones.

[markpeterjameslegg]

I think you should change the position of the PPK on each loading screen (like in the default ones), looks repetitive.
Also, in my opinion, it looks like plastic lol (the gun), so I would use GE:S one or find another. Would be good if you could use GE:S' font, too, it'll look really different when you read hints or just by comparing it to official ones.

The GE:S guns are too low resolution, these screens are high resolution, therefore they wouldn't look right... I can work on the current weapon however, see if I can make it look less plastic, I do see what you mean on that point.

[markpeterjameslegg]

I given the weapon a bit of a going over, looks better for sure, there was too much gamma before and I didn't notice until you mentioned it looked plastic...

[markpeterjameslegg]

OK... I have taken on board the feedback of Jonathan [SSL] and Graslu and given the shadows more blur (I think that's what Jonathan meant?), also adjusted the lighting, contrast and gamma on the PPK, thanks to you both. Don't forget to zoom in and take a closer look, especially at the gun...







So what do you think? Should I carry on making the rest?

[markpeterjameslegg]

With a silver PPK...