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little 00:
:) Can you slide on the ice? :) makes for a slick surprise
CCsaint10:
Yes, the ice is nice and slippery. :)
mookie:
It seems like the snow everywhere has a pinkish tint, which I assume comes from the sky light. This looks good and reminds me of the mood of the surface level on the darker time, but it doesn't seem to match the skybox well. From what I can see, the skybox is a cold grey every way you look.
The pond does seem too blue, but that could be partly because the snow looks pink. The apparent blueness of surface water is mainly a reflection of the sky; if the pond looks much different from the skybox the effect looks unnatural.
It seems like the dirty snow texture could have a ruddier/muddier color. If I remember right, in the original it was more towards beige; I'm not sure if that's a direction I would go, but a yellowish color would make the snow seem a little bluer by contrast. If it's convenient, blending the dirty snow into actual mud in a few places might be a nice look to try.
Before you release, you should try to adjust the helipad decal and the snow on the helipad so it doesn't look like the snow's been painted over.
It's hard to tell from these screenshots, but it doesn't look like the floodlights are casting an appreciable amount of light.
The positioning of the cagelights opposite the huge pipe in your last screenshot and (presumably) right by the body armour seems strange; they look much too low to the floor. The inside area seen here also seems like a place that could be more distinctly different from the outside, with deeper shadows and warmer (yellower) light.
If I remember right, the original surface was basically triskelion-shaped (i.e. acyclic). It looks like you've stayed pretty faithful in most respects, so if the layout is the same I hope the perimeter of the map is very playable, and the snow goes up and down enough to make some areas around the perimeter feel like isolated areas.
Looks great, would love to be able to get a BSP to walk around.
CCsaint10:
Mookie, THANK YOU FOR THE CRITIQUES! :D I really appreciate it. By the way, I read them a long time ago, just forgot to respond. I have incorporated a lot of your suggestions in and you can expect an update within the week (as long as something gay doesn't happen and i need to fix something I broke lol) But yeah, just wanted to let you guys know that I am still working on it making it better for ya. :)
[GE:S Com] DF Ank1:
yeah :D
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