Well, try not to take this too harshly...
Firstly, I like the font, it looks nice but it's very large and takes up an unreasonable amount of space. Most people avoid using wallpapers with large imposing text on them.
The red ring should go around the E, not on top of it.
See example.
'
A Half Life 2 Mod' is completely unnecessary, anyone who would be using this as a wallpaper would already know that Goldeneye Source is a half life 2 mod. More specifically that is rather incorrect anyway, being that it's a Source mod, Half Life 2 does not necessarily need to be owned, the engine does.
There's really not much else I can say... It's text over a screenshot. I am curious though, what map is that? It looks like it could be runway... If it is then it's a very old screenshot and not representative of the mod in it's current state.