Allright. I'll do the german version.
I found some little issues on the english version.
The number of kills necessary for earning "Licence to Grill" "Man on the Moon" and "From Russia with Love" are missing.
The description of "Just a Fleshwound" seems incomplete to me.
"Win a knife duel (both players holding knives and attacking each other)"
Afaik, you have to take knife demage before killing the other player.
Suggestion:
"Win a knife duel but be hit with the enemy's knife at least once"
I think we don't need the line in (), since "knife duel" allready means both combatants have to use a knife.
"The enemy has stolen your intelligence! You must break into the enemy's stronghold and take your intelligence back to your base! Be forewarned, your intelligence must be back in it's original place before you can capture the enemy's.
Sound strange. and IMO it means the enemy has both yours and his intelligence and you have to get your's back first before going back again to capture his.
Should be like:
"The enemy is trying to steal your intelligence! You must break into the enemy's stronghold and take his intelligence. Bring it back to your base but be forewarned, your intelligence must be in it's original place before you can capture the enemy's."
or:
"The enemy has stolen your intelligence, you've stolen his! You must break into the enemy's stronghold and take your intelligence back to your base! Be forewarned, the enemy will try to get back his intelligence, too. Capturing will only work if both, the enemy's and your intelligence are on your side."
Also:
As a player you get the Golden Gun and try to kill the Baron before he kills you.
Afaik, you don't start with the AuG and only one player will get it.
Suggestion:
"As a player you have to get the Golden Gun and try to kill the Baron before he kills you. Also be aware of the other players when holding the Golden Gun, they might try to get their hands on it."
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