Kinda busy. Sounds like it's trying too hard.
Normalised to 0dB... well, you didn't clip at least, but even I like 1dB of headroom.
Bad fade out, it's like falling down stairs.
I'd like to hear something that sounds more like a background action theme that sets a pace, rather than six leads fighting for spotlight.
Which tools do you use? We already have one Reason raisin, which is one too many. Much like his idea of alcohol moderation.