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Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb

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basstronix:
If you could care less, then you still care.

Polizei:
You care more than you should, actually.

Loafie, Hero of Dreams:

Xanatos:
well duh, if he actually asked for mirrors without that pointless comment at the end i would've provided them. STUPIDS!!!

Shaken not Stirred:
I'll sum it up from what I saw until interwebz is fixed:

1. Your pacing could be much, much better.
2. Stop using inside jokes. They only apply to a niche audience.
3. Your camera work needs improvement.
4. The "he took all the ammo" line was priceless.
5. Your editing was okay, but there's room for improvement.
6. Do you know what a "stage line" is?
7. Overall, there we opportunities, Xanatos. Opportunities for a great joke. Opportunities missed.

Of course, the full review will have details, but that's all that I can remember.

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