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Author Topic: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb  (Read 19678 times)

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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #15 on: September 22, 2007, 05:14:41 pm »

poor poor mrsentual. i think the unseen ironic part about your major kong critique is that I had to double for him voicewise in the very end when he's riding down on the bomb O_O and yeah TFG did mess up on the prevert line. couldn't get him to correct it since he was this thing called busy so I had to let it slide. good read though, at least for me and a couple others. i'm sure everyone else reading this thread is thinking along the lines of tl;dr.

and out of all people and to be fair i'd prefer not to see an analysis from SnS :P

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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #16 on: September 22, 2007, 05:43:31 pm »

The whoo-hoos were good. ; j

I would've re-cast the role for proper preeversions.
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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #17 on: October 24, 2007, 05:33:15 am »

It must be your lucky week, Xanatos, because my computer apparently broke up with Google Video, and I don't much care for the "film" to download it.
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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #18 on: October 24, 2007, 10:16:10 am »

It must be your lucky week, Xanatos, because my computer apparently broke up with Google Video, and I don't much care for the "film" to download it.

You're about a month off buddy.
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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #19 on: October 24, 2007, 12:52:37 pm »

there are more mirrors but i could care less to provide you with them

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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #20 on: October 24, 2007, 06:30:33 pm »

If you could care less, then you still care.
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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #21 on: October 24, 2007, 10:33:40 pm »

You care more than you should, actually.
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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #22 on: October 24, 2007, 10:38:43 pm »

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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #23 on: October 24, 2007, 11:45:54 pm »

well duh, if he actually asked for mirrors without that pointless comment at the end i would've provided them. STUPIDS!!!

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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #24 on: October 25, 2007, 05:44:12 am »

I'll sum it up from what I saw until interwebz is fixed:

1. Your pacing could be much, much better.
2. Stop using inside jokes. They only apply to a niche audience.
3. Your camera work needs improvement.
4. The "he took all the ammo" line was priceless.
5. Your editing was okay, but there's room for improvement.
6. Do you know what a "stage line" is?
7. Overall, there we opportunities, Xanatos. Opportunities for a great joke. Opportunities missed.

Of course, the full review will have details, but that's all that I can remember.
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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #25 on: October 25, 2007, 11:15:21 am »

He is targeting a niche audience.  Otherwise, yes.
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Re: Dr. Strangeman or: How I learned to stop worrying and plant the bomb
« Reply #26 on: October 25, 2007, 12:55:50 pm »

a little bland and lacking of detail aren't we O_O

i'm guessing you haven't seen the whole thing so maybe that's why you're being really vague. it'll be good once you've seen it all.

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